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Wednesday 18 September 2013

Africa Speech.

I am learning to write to persuade others using the correct structure.


Hello my name is Junior.My speech is about the people  who help their selves and who they don’t help their selves.The people they helps their selves it’s friends and students
the mostly its the parents and the teachers.The agers and junior they don't help themselves  and doesn’t help others.The people they help themselves they share their things to the other person.


The Africa people they need help.The African people need to support  them.Some of their parents and  student are  dying because they need help.The red cross and countries  are helping them  for the things they need.There are 200 million people are dying in Africa.


The Africa people finding the food and water.They need the people that real help them.The people they don't help themselves they don't help the people that they need helps.The people in  Africa they are sulfur .The other people they are playing to the rugby team.Some of  them are finding their home.Click on this blue thing show you what happening in African people.


Here is the other things for the Africa.

The Africa are trying to work hard for them.The other people in Africa are singing,dancing,playing ruby,driving plane and ship and army.Because Africa people are trying to try there best and to help their people.The Africa country are so important to me because I can share my staff to them.Some people in  Africa are in the others countries.Some of their kids its in countries because they doing their schools and they are learning how to machines and  stuff.Click the another blue charters.
http://www.africare.org/http://www.africare.org/

1 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well done Junior. You have worked very hard to express your understanding and attempted to persuade your readers about reaching out to help others, in this case, those in Africa.

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